D#4, HW#2, Grammar Assignment

For this grammar assignment I focused on using commas properly, setting off items in a series, setting off introductory elements, and proper semicolon use. I focused on these specific topic areas becuase they are things that I use frequently in my writing and I always get mixed up on how to use them properly. I completed exercises 30.3, 30.2, and 31.1. They helped me re-learn how to properly use commas etc. in my writing. The paragraphs that I revised are....

• The topic that I have selected for my research proposal is abstinence-only sex education in high schools across the United States. I am interested in looking at the outcome and results of these type of programs. Such as the rate of increase or decrease for teenage pregnancy, sexually transmitted disease spread amongst teenagers, as well as the rates of increase or decrease for teenage participation in oral sex. My focused research question is; how effective is abstinence-only sex education in preventing teen pregnancy, STD spread, and oral sex participation?
• This topic is so controversial because the issue of sex and sexuality has always been an uncomfortable issue for Americans. Also, dealing with what is considered right and wrong varies greatly from person to person. Sex is a very individual thing and very personal. Although the decision to have sex or not have sex is an individual one many people are concerned in influencing other people’s decisions (like their children etc). This is where the controversy arises. So many different groups of people such as parents and religious communities want to have their say in the matter and tell people what is right and wrong. Also, politicians are influenced to pass laws regarding the teaching of sex in the classroom by these same groups; basically putting up another barrier for sex education.